Saloon Girl

Saloon Girl

157K Reads 2.5K Votes 30 Part Story
SouthernBellexoxo By SouthernBellexoxo Updated Nov 17, 2016

Cassidy Smith suffered the loss of her parents when their farm burned down. She was barely 18 and had no other choice but to work in the saloon. She was ashamed of her job, but had to put her pride aside. Cole Mason was an outlaw with a past. Soon after first seeing Cassidy, he fell in love with her. Cassidy loved Cole with all her heart, but do they get a happily ever after? Or does the ruggedness of the Wild West and the mysteries of Cole's past interfere with their plans?

blondieblu blondieblu Apr 03, 2014
omgah this is so good.. I love the characters and the way the story flows.no typos or anything and I love how it is written in first person perspective..can't wait to read more!!!
fruitcup8 fruitcup8 Dec 29, 2013
I love this! I can't believe I haven't found this before! The characters and whole chapter was great! Thank you for sharing this story because it is truly a gem!
WeresvsVamps WeresvsVamps Jul 12, 2012
Luv how you started th story XD. Once I started reason I was instantly pulled in X)
SouthernBellexoxo SouthernBellexoxo May 10, 2012
@Charenee Thank you :) I love conflicting emotions, I'm so happy that you saw that. :) 
                              And don't worry, you took the time to read mine, so no 'yo mama' joke will be necessary!
SouthernBellexoxo SouthernBellexoxo May 02, 2012
@tiptoe13 
                              Thank you! I'm going to fix that as soon as I get done! I have 3 chapters left so I'm going to go back and edit!
                              Thank you for the feedback! I appreciate it! I love hear what I can do to make my story better! Sorry for just now seeing your comment, my updates rarely work haha
                              :)
sochill sochill Apr 10, 2012
Cole. :))) I love that name. Anyways, I told you I'd comment and read tomorrow but, oh well. :) I really like the setting of the story and the mood. And the accents are amazing. Hahaha! :)) keep it up!