The Heir's Pretend Girlfriend

The Heir's Pretend Girlfriend

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abby By simplicity432 Updated Jan 18, 2015

Shannon Richelieu just lived a normal teenage life with her mother at their Los Angeles apartment until her mom remarried Christopher Vincent, the Olympic gold medalist. So she ditches her life back at Los Angeles and tries her best to adjust to life in Beverly Hills.              

Along the way, she never thought she would score herself a boyfriend. Well, a fake boyfriend that is. Especially since the fake boyfriend is no other than William Prescott, the son of the most famous Prescott Industries. Other than being a complete jerkface all the time, he actually can be rather charming. But, too bad she can't fall in love with him because she's pretending to be his girlfriend to make his ex-girlfriend jealous. It's not like she would fall for him anyways ...

I am sorry author for being annoying on the first paragraph of you book, but....
                              IM ONLY HUMAN! AND I BLEED WHEN I FALL DOWN! YOUR WORDS IN MY HEAD KNIFES IN MY HEART!
njhhesftzjm njhhesftzjm May 31
Yoooo finally a girl in a romance book that can stand up for herself
K-the-Queen-Tribute K-the-Queen-Tribute Jun 06, 2015
I would love to wear uniforms so I didn't have to try so hard in the mornings (I go to school with a particularly vicious students). I would actually be able to sleep in!
fkahazel fkahazel Aug 01, 2014
I like the idea of this story. I think you could use more descriptions to draw in the readers. Dialogue alone won't carry the story. Describe the setting. Describe  characters. Use a more expensive vocabulary. But it's off to a great start do far :)
annabear01 annabear01 Jul 21, 2014
I am in love with this story. It's entertaining, sweet and hilarious. And those chapter titles rule!
Madlingxox Madlingxox Mar 30, 2014
Loving it, so funny, cute and unique, can't wait to read the rest