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Rebecca Maria By BeccaM16XoXo Updated Feb 06, 2011

Do you feel HOPE when what you want is in hands reach? Do you feel FAITH when a miracle crosses your path?Do you feel DESIRE when you want something so bad you can't sleep? Do you feel LOVE towards those who you care about most? If you do then hold on to those feeling because tomorrow they might be DRANED!

lilly-rain lilly-rain Oct 05, 2011
@BeccaM16XoXo No problemo, it is really good so far! Can't wait until I get more free time to finish reading it =)
BeccaM16XoXo BeccaM16XoXo Oct 05, 2011
@lilly-rain thanks so much for even reading it :) and im really glad you liked it!!  Your books are amazing by the way :P
lilly-rain lilly-rain Oct 05, 2011
Sorry it's taken me so long to check this out, but great story! it's only chap one and Im hooked, it flows well, the storyline is great, the creepy soul sucking character is a neewbie for I like it! adding this to my library to continue reading the rest after =)
BeccaM16XoXo BeccaM16XoXo Sep 27, 2011
@MidnightSacrifice thanks so much! i hope you like it :) and your story is really good to i liked it a lot
BeccaM16XoXo BeccaM16XoXo Apr 08, 2011
@YesturdaygirlTomorro true not everyone likes vampires but thanks for the comment anyway. 
YesturdaygirlTomorro YesturdaygirlTomorro Apr 07, 2011
You are a very good writer. I did see a view punctuation errors but thats about it. Hate to say it, but I do not like vampire books at all. So your story isn't very interesting to me.