I've given this story to music0monster, who will be editing it and changing things round a bit. Feel free to read the little bit I wrote before you read her version- ItsAbee x
One note..."to add to THE rest." You left it as "to add to rest." All in all pretty intriguing. I SHALL READ ON..
Raw talent chica. (I've always wanted to call someone that) I mean it in a good way...I SHALL READ ON.
I enjoy the lead in and I've not read the skulduggery pleasant books because, well, I just haven't. they sound interesting if your story is similar to it...so.... on i read.
:) REally Good! kinda reminds me of the host because of the end!! anywa read my story!!! it called brooklyn finest be sure to comment!!!