The Reminiscences......

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Supriya Thakur By ThakurSupriya Updated 3 years ago
“Every man has some reminiscences which he would not tell to everyone, but only to his friends. He has others which he would not reveal even to his friends, but only to himself, and that in secret. But finally there are still others which a man is even afraid to tell himself, and every decent man has a considerable number of such things stored away. That is, one can even say that the more decent he is, the greater the number of such things in his mind.” ― Fyodor Dostoyevsky.
    Here is the collection of such reminiscences of gaiety and gloom from past.
    Hope you can relate it. HAPPY READING :)
@ThakurSupriya Thank you :) any advice or tips would be much appreciated
I reall liked the way you conveyed all of the emotions. It made reading this a joy and you did a very nice job :) you should check out my stuff i think you would really like it :))
@ThakurSupriya  it's a really nice poem for one of your first works :) you did really good. Build on it, you'll become great! ;) and thanks!
Nicely written but at some points it feels like you just picked a random word to rhyme maybe try thinking of some others :) nice job! Maybe you can check out some of mine? My poetry is very dark but hopefully you'll like it.
@ThakurSupriya your welcome and I understand what you mean about leaving a piece of ypourself in your work *smiling*
It's moving... The rhyming and the flow is good. I honestly felt sad just reading your poem. Love it. :)