Ain't Nothing But A G Thing (Urban)

Ain't Nothing But A G Thing (Urban)

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ObeyLastQueens By ObeyLastQueens Updated Mar 27, 2014

Cassidy Carter is a cut-throat, sharp tongue girl from South Florida. Her words and actions could cut anyone in half. Being raised in a family of OGs has its perks and downfalls, but will she learn to balance it out?

  • thug
  • urban
Urban_Helpers Urban_Helpers Mar 28, 2014
it was confusing during done part buts good chapter. Just clean up the dialogue. :-)
Urban_Helpers Urban_Helpers Mar 28, 2014
it's a good start, but you don't need the book to be in italics unless it's expressing her thoughts or its a flashback.
Urban_Helpers Urban_Helpers Mar 28, 2014
Space out the dialogue when all of them are talking. 
                              
                              Since your story is in first point of view, we shouldn't be able to know other characters talk especially if he whispered. This part is unnecessary for the story.
Kglollipopsugardrop Kglollipopsugardrop Mar 07, 2014
Omg this so good girl!! this story got me on the edge of my damn seat!! TURN UP!!!!! update Pleez!! XD
Kglollipopsugardrop Kglollipopsugardrop Mar 01, 2014
dang Cassidy be sayin true shit!!! she basically a true ass thug running them streets!! this is a great story!! good job and update!!