The First time, Not The Last

The First time, Not The Last

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Freshface416 By Freshface416 Completed

This poem is about the anticipation and the culmination of desire.

SiriCat SiriCat Feb 28, 2011
wow, i really like the structure, how everything just builds up then reaches that moment when they explore their feelings for each other- u could feel their tension at first then joy, comfort and of course love; great work!