Tove is a pretty ordinary school kid well that is until he meets his everything
Ok for advice I'd say don't make all of the sounds let the reader imagine that and I'd also say that when they are thinking try putting a' like you would when they are talking ok sweet cheeks but other than that its awesome!!!! Good work onii-chan
Hey that means Mitch is a gay too cuz hes gonna rape a guy xD
Hes a lot of things but I don't see the phrase the man I love
Wow!, Blake is a lot to Tove, but what is Tove to Blake..Can't wait to read and find out..
Very good, what kind of school just let that happen..and Mitch the b***h, needs to have his salad tossed a few times...