Sweet torment (yaoi)

Sweet torment (yaoi)

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sexxy llama By xxxyaoixxx Updated Feb 25, 2016

Tove is a pretty ordinary school kid well that is until he meets his everything

bry967 bry967 Apr 25
Same, hence the reason I graduated as a junior in high school.
Saphira2286 Saphira2286 Jun 30
Ah snap! He's dead?! Not even a minute in and somebody dead,damn!! This'll be good!!👍👍👍
AvilaLavan AvilaLavan Apr 04, 2016
Ok for advice I'd say don't make all of the sounds let the reader imagine that and I'd also say that when they are thinking try putting a' like you would when they are talking ok sweet cheeks but other than that its awesome!!!! Good work onii-chan
ursmolchild ursmolchild Mar 15, 2016
Hey that means Mitch is a gay too cuz hes gonna rape a guy xD
JackieAppling JackieAppling Nov 30, 2016
Hes a lot of things but I don't see the phrase the man I love
AvilaLavan AvilaLavan Apr 04, 2016
Ok for advice I'd say don't make all of the sounds let the reader imagine that and I'd also say that when they are thinking try putting a' like you would when they are talking ok sweet cheeks but other than that its awesome!!!! Good work onii-chan