My Hocus Pocus

My Hocus Pocus

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kimiique By kimiique Completed

One of my dark moments that had taken my kids love to make me see a light at the end of the tunnel, and finally i got through it. Happy to say i gained some good wisdom from my experience and would love to share it.

dreamy_ dreamy_ Feb 10, 2011
@kimiique Oh, lol, it's a poem? Woops maybe that'd why I didn't understand
dreamy_ dreamy_ Feb 10, 2011
First, you shouldn't use words like
                              OMG!!!
                               That is unbelieveably childish and don't use capitals like that... Also I really don't get your story... I've read it the 8th time now...?
                              Also bad grammar at the start.
                              Sorry but this is.. Not something I would like to waste my time on much anymore :\
dreamy_ dreamy_ Feb 06, 2011
Nice story!
                              
                              will you check mine out?
                              http://www.wattpad.com/994235-despicable-us
                              and comment on it please!