The Mystery Singer

The Mystery Singer

174K Reads 6.2K Votes 38 Part Story
prettysmiles1999 By prettysmiles1999 Completed

It's going to be okay, Isabella.
Yeah right.
Everything's going to be okay. The whole world's counting on you.
Pfft! The WHOLE world?
Yeah. And you're going to do just fine.  Now, pick up that mike and face the audience. 
I can't.
Pick it up.
No.
Isabella-
I swallow, and then steal a glance at the people behind me. My classmates, my teachers, my family-I take a deep breath. And then I exit the stage.

Um, how can she stop it. It's the brain which SUBCONSCIOUSLY does that. Key word, subconsciously. That means you have no control.
I would change this sentence and say that she's too lazy to walk on a daily basis or that she wakes up really late
                              , because the amount of money you have has nothing to do with how eco friendly you are.
Nightmares don't have anything to do with physical health. At least I think
It's great so far!! I'm lovin it!!
                              Awesome Job!👍👍❤❤
kaycakes_26 kaycakes_26 Aug 03
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Ilysem Ilysem Jul 19, 2015
It mic (sorry I just wanted to let you know) but I'm enjoying your book so far : )