Broken Hearts are Death (lesbian)

Broken Hearts are Death (lesbian)

62K Reads 558 Votes 4 Part Story
letmefollowthestars By letmefollowthestars Completed

Katherine and Taylor are best friend, Katherine fall in love during 3th grade. Taylor flirts alot with Kath but she think its just nothing for Kath because she doesnt know that Kath is so in love with her. After sometime passes by Taylor starts to get comfuse about her feelings toward Kath. During Taylor trying to find her self alot of emotional even and surprising things happen that changes both Katherine and Taylors life.

iris_tomlinson128 iris_tomlinson128 May 20, 2013
it is sooo interesting im exited to keep reading i feel just like her lol
xyzhi_ xyzhi_ Dec 23, 2012
I feel like I've read the plot before. Like the very same plot but diff characters idk.
chosen_one chosen_one Aug 08, 2011
This is a good story so far. A few spelling and grammar mistakes, but good.
                              Voted!
Bloodynewmoon Bloodynewmoon Apr 17, 2011
Few typos, but an interesting story. However I have a peeve with one of your quotes. It should be something like this:
                              
                              "See I am up, so," she paused to yawn, <- No parenthesis when someone is talking!
MusicIsMySoul MusicIsMySoul Apr 17, 2011
Yhupp its pretty good, Kudos for trying a lesbian love story, i takes guts to write about something like that :) There are alot of grammar mistakes though, but its good enough that I voted anyway :) 
Spahkle Spahkle Mar 27, 2011
you shouldn't use parentheses and your grammar has a lot of mistakes. It kind of felt like you rushed the whoole thing