Desperately (Under Construction)

14 Part Story 238K Reads 1.4K Votes
Jenifer Sun By JenSun Updated 3 years ago
    Christina Force wasn't a girl who wore her heart on her sleeve. She had a past of not so good relationships. But then Sam Goldman comes into her life and she finds herself falling desperately in love with him. Sam enters Christina life of money and power, as well as envy and hatred. When Christina loses everything she ever had, including the one person she never thought would turn their back against her, Sam is the only one who can keep her sane.
The first line gives an interesting view of what to expect. Voted!
This first chapter was awesomely written and described the Idea of love perfectly. This is intense! But I do have to agree with @ysabek on the blurb. It tells the reader nothing about the book. You'll definitely have to change that :)
Very well written! I also love the last sentence, it gives everything before it meaning, and also a kick to it! great job
Normally I don't believe in love, but your book brought a whole new meaning into it and something just pulsed in my heart when I read it
It's a really nice plot and storyline and it just makes you fall in love wothe Sam. It reminds m alot of Romeo and Juliet. But I don't like the way it leaves off as a cliffhanger
I absolutly love the first sentene, it brought me in almost instantly!