Desperately (Under Construction)

Desperately (Under Construction)

238K Reads 1.4K Votes 14 Part Story
Jenifer Sun By JenSun Updated May 20, 2012


Christina Force wasn't a girl who wore her heart on her sleeve. She had a past of not so good relationships. But then Sam Goldman comes into her life and she finds herself falling desperately in love with him. Sam enters Christina life of money and power, as well as envy and hatred. When Christina loses everything she ever had, including the one person she never thought would turn their back against her, Sam is the only one who can keep her sane.

Written by Jennifer Sun
Edited by J. L. Sun

KaylaKrantz KaylaKrantz Nov 17, 2012
The first line gives an interesting view of what to expect. Voted!
altarviolence altarviolence Nov 16, 2012
This first chapter was awesomely written and described the Idea of love perfectly. This is intense! But I do have to agree with @ysabek on the blurb. It tells the reader nothing about the book. You'll definitely have to change that :)
MollyBennett1 MollyBennett1 Nov 16, 2012
Very well written! I also love the last sentence, it gives everything before it meaning, and also a kick to it! great job
LuisAgentRussiantige LuisAgentRussiantige Nov 16, 2012
Normally I don't believe in love, but your book brought a whole new meaning into it and something just pulsed in my heart when I read it
Mikayla01 Mikayla01 Jun 19, 2012
I absolutly love the first sentene, it brought me in almost instantly!
RabiaSadaat RabiaSadaat Jun 19, 2012
Descriptive descriptions and I like the thought tracking. Good complex and short sentences. :) Voted.