The Murdering Games Have Begun

3 Part Story 2.6K Reads 27 Votes
writerz101 By writerz101 Updated 5 years ago
Jonathon Taylor is a stalker, a murderer, a horrible person who enjoys the pain of others. Christie doesn't want him to get away with this. Christie is a beautiful-looking woman who may be his next victim..........
First, I love the title. It makes a reader want to pick it up. Then you draw the reader in from your first line.  The only thing, and this is small, is that you might want to either do scene transitions if your're going to change character point of view, or you might want to just stick to Jonathon's, especially if you're going to kill off Christie. This is a tiny thing though. Love this story so far. I'm a fan. 
First, I love the title. It makes a reader want to pick it up. Then you draw the reader in from your first line.  The only thing, and this is small, is that you might want to either do scene transitions if your're going to change character point of view, or you might want to just stick to Jonathon's, especially if you're going to kill off Christie. This is a tiny thing though. Love this story so far. I'm a fan. 
First, I love the title. It makes a reader want to pick it up. Then you draw the reader in from your first line.  The only thing, and this is small, is that you might want to either do scene transitions if your're going to change character point of view, or you might want to just stick to Jonathon's, especially if you're going to kill off Christie. This is a tiny thing though. Love this story so far. I'm a fan. 
First, I love the title. It makes a reader want to pick it up. Then you draw the reader in from your first line.  The only thing, and this is small, is that you might want to either do scene transitions if your're going to change character point of view, or you might want to just stick to Jonathon's, especially if you're going to kill off Christie. This is a tiny thing though. Love this story so far. I'm a fan. 
First, I love the title. It makes a reader want to pick it up. Then you draw the reader in from your first line.  The only thing, and this is small, is that you might want to either do scene transitions if your're going to change character point of view, or you might want to just stick to Jonathon's, especially if you're going to kill off Christie. This is a tiny thing though. Love this story so far. I'm a fan. 
First, I love the title. It makes a reader want to pick it up. Then you draw the reader in from your first line.  The only thing, and this is small, is that you might want to either do scene transitions if your're going to change character point of view, or you might want to just stick to Jonathon's, especially if you're going to kill off Christie. This is a tiny thing though. Love this story so far. I'm a fan.