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Enprix Deatharte By Enprix Updated May 04, 2014

Enprix Deatharte, a boy said to have no actual capabilities, struggles through a world where everyone has "Ability", a power where one can do things that were thought impossible. He has to face people who are after him, and free himself from his own bind. (Revision meaning, I'm correcting lexical and grammar errors. Also removing inconsistencies if there are such. Please bear with me.)

herralouese herralouese Oct 19, 2012
Pretty good miss author. But i think the persons point of view at the prologue is way too long? It kinda bore me to read it and anyways all in all he seemed to be so sweet and thats what it kept me from reading. 
                              You have the potential. Keep it up xx
Enprix Enprix Oct 18, 2012
@Xxfalling_pressurexX Thank you. ^_^. I appreciate you appreciating what I wrote. Thanks. Really.
xXxBroken_DreamerxXx xXxBroken_DreamerxXx Oct 17, 2012
awww :l <3 this was lovely (: an amazing way to start out a story!
Enprix Enprix May 15, 2012
@glitznglamour Thanks. I am a guy, BTW, so I may have an advantage.
                              Hehehe. My brain is throbbing right now so I can't read your story. But I will read it, don't worry. Maybe tomorrow. just not now. Sorry.
glitznglamour glitznglamour May 15, 2012
so this is from a guy's pov. i love reading that kind of stories to see if they are realistic enough to be told from a guy's pov
Enprix Enprix May 05, 2012
@xXDeasVailXx Thanks. ^_^. Heh. 
                              I do really have problems with tenses. And I can't seem to get the hang of it.