damaged • c.h

damaged • c.h

1.3K Reads 77 Votes 5 Part Story
destiny By horrifyinq Updated Apr 23, 2014

I was completely broken, and shattered. Nobody could help me, they thought they could, well, they thought wrong.

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  • 5sos
  • ashton
  • calum
  • clifford
  • hemmings
  • hood
  • irwin
  • love
  • luke
  • michael
idiotisley idiotisley Jan 23, 2014
This is really amazing x The plot is very unique, along with your writing style. It's really good, great job beautiful! c:
marisarosexo marisarosexo Jan 22, 2014
It's great. I like the plot and it wants me to keep reading it. The detail is nice and I like the imperfection in your character :)
SimplyElegance SimplyElegance Jan 22, 2014
I really like the beginning, and the description is great. I loved how you didn't describe your character as perfect and showed that she does have imperfections. It's great so far.
SimplyElegance SimplyElegance Jan 22, 2014
I like the use of short, abrupt sentences in the beginning. It makes the blurb sound mysterious and interesting. I love your character's name and the title is cool :D
ZombieTime ZombieTime Jan 21, 2014
THIS IS. WOW.
                              
                              I love the detailing and how you write everything down.
                              It's nice to know that for once the leading role isn't thin :)
                              
                              I'm not one for fanfiction, but I'll be definitely reading more of this!
Violet_flame Violet_flame Jan 20, 2014
I like it so far, I like the characters and it's really well written.Can't wait to find out what's next :p