The Knocking

The Knocking

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Mr. Sizzae banks By Ragnarokao Updated Feb 22, 2011

In a Museum, six students of the 11th grade find themselves cornered and isolated from the world. But they're not all alone, they can hear knocks. Knocking rings through the museum and so do the screams of teenagers..... Can’t you hear them?

DJ2012 DJ2012 Mar 22, 2011
I wante to say than you for the dedication of the two chapters of this stoey. You are a good friend and I likeyour style of writing. Keep up the good work.  
JustJK JustJK Feb 27, 2011
that's good, i get the feeling that they're stressed :D, keep writing, and get to the horror bit soon XD
mystical-era mystical-era Feb 15, 2011
WOAH! that was good you have to up load soon very intriguing :D
HyperActiveChild4 HyperActiveChild4 Feb 05, 2011
Really Goood.......I Have No Idea What To Do.....Damn It -.-'