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They Sold Me To A Mafia Family

They Sold Me To A Mafia Family

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Alexis By Agateophobia Completed

A girl name Jade was sold by a mafia family cause of her parents in debt. To able to pay it all she has to live with that family where she cooks and sometimes cleans. She meets the maifa's son Aiden who she pretty wells get along with. Will she able to live with them or would she try to run away. Or could this be the started of someting new.

girltiara girltiara Apr 25
What kind of family does she have??? 😬😈when the robbers come to the house I ain't gon be there to protect the moms stupid ass
xMandMx xMandMx May 07
Hey I'm a new writer here and I thought you might enjoy my story. It only has one chapter right now and it would be really nice if you could leave feedback on what you like or think we should improve. We're open to criticism.  It's called Behind Her Beauty. Thank you!
hunggyblackiemonstah hunggyblackiemonstah Nov 03, 2016
the paragraphs are really bad but still, i ,like it...
                              please edit more and change the paragraph splitting. i don't understand it much...
Jean_Adrianna1998 Jean_Adrianna1998 Nov 13, 2016
wow, that's harsh.... HOW DO YOU SELL YOUR FAMILY?!!!
                              I'D RATHER TAKE A BULLET TO MY HEAD THAN SELL MY FAMILY!!!
pena_tiffany pena_tiffany Dec 30, 2016
Hi I'm a new writer and I'll appreciate it if someone read my new book called Walking On The Wild Side it's about the 1920s mafia if you're interested please read it :)
CueCalmCatastrophe CueCalmCatastrophe Oct 05, 2015
This was an interesting start, just work on capitalization and maybe add a little more dialogue. Also, the paragraphing is a little difficult to read, but other then that, it's a good beginning. I look forward to reading on.