This work shows an unexpected reversal of hunter and prey with a surprising element.
This feels like a moment of adrenaline, really liked your description. A good effort :)
This was cool! Although (because I'm a little slow on the uptake) it took me some time to register what was going on, I read some of the comments down here, read your story again, and now I understand it perfectly and think it is very good, especially for something written on a whim. :)
@mylifeisaverage I put the kettle on and will pass the sandwiches in a minute. Yeh, cos you'd be invited to share the chocolate, love, we not mean. Arse whooping will happen to @AfterP_BeforeR though, not showing up, bad bad wolf.
Well, you did fan me and knew the quote so I guess it's cool. ;)
ohhhhh.... i get it *feels slow*
nice work.... very very good :)
Oh yeah, he got a swipe on his cheek and then the blood starts pouring into his eye. Is he hanging upside down? Lol