The Hunter and His Prey- A Vampire Flash Fic

The Hunter and His Prey- A Vampire Flash Fic

719 Reads 20 Votes 1 Part Story
Scott By mylifeisaverage Completed

This work shows an unexpected reversal of hunter and prey with a surprising element.

MadelineCarter3 MadelineCarter3 Jun 03, 2014
This feels like a moment of adrenaline, really liked your description. A good effort :)
TsukuyomiTensei TsukuyomiTensei Apr 08, 2013
This was cool! Although (because I'm a little slow on the uptake) it took me some time to register what was going on, I read some of the comments down here, read your story again, and now I understand it perfectly and think it is very good, especially for something written on a whim. :)
Emiloo Emiloo Jan 28, 2011
@mylifeisaverage I put the kettle on and will pass the sandwiches in a minute. Yeh, cos you'd be invited to share the chocolate, love, we not mean. Arse whooping will happen to @AfterP_BeforeR though, not showing up, bad bad wolf.
mylifeisaverage mylifeisaverage Jan 27, 2011
@Emiloo *whimpers
                              
                              Well, you did fan me and knew the quote so I guess it's cool. ;)
jamilla_ jamilla_ Jan 25, 2011
ohhhhh.... i get it *feels slow*
                              nice work.... very very good :)
Mera2876 Mera2876 Jan 18, 2011
Oh yeah, he got a swipe on his cheek and then the blood starts pouring into his eye. Is he hanging upside down? Lol