Rotten Affection

Rotten Affection

36.3K Reads 142 Votes 8 Part Story
Sophie By Another_Sophia Updated Feb 20, 2011

Joeleen is just an ordinary girl who nobody really pays much attention to. Or is it the other way around? She finds herself having some odd affections towards her brother, which start to scare and worry her at the same time. She tries to deny this, but it consumes her actions and mind, forcing her to give in. The thing is though, will this change her life forever?

Another_Sophia Another_Sophia Aug 03, 2012
@kimathy Meh, the grammar mistakes dont really bother me. They always pop up unoticed somehow. And your welcome ^.^
kimathy kimathy Aug 03, 2012
Wow, thanks for the dedication. It sounds better and flows better, though there are some grammar mistakes. :]
Another_Sophia Another_Sophia Jul 29, 2011
@kimathy um yea i know i wrote this a few years ago and im really considering rewriting the whole thing or just deleting it
kimathy kimathy Jul 20, 2011
You should trry showing us, not telling us. And all the exclamation marks look really uncool.
Another_Sophia Another_Sophia Feb 20, 2011
@BrokenBeyondRepair sorry but i dont read storys that people suggest to me. it kinda turns me off when people advertise their stories on other peoples storys
                              
                              im sure its good though and sorry bout the shortage of fans it took me a year to get the amount of fans i have now
BrokenBeyondRepair BrokenBeyondRepair Nov 20, 2010
hey can you please check out my story i only have 6 fans please i will return the favor
                              
                              http://www.wattpad.com/647754-player