Dreaming of Neverland

Dreaming of Neverland

7.2K Reads 528 Votes 18 Part Story
Kara Michelle By KaraMichelleBooks Updated Aug 29

I live in New London, Americland-one of only five surviving countries in the world. Many years ago, after the Grand War and long before I was born, countries shut down their borders in a vie for power, forcing each to fend for themselves, and only a handful persevered. Americland, Europland, Africland, Japanland, and Australand. I've always heard rumors, though, of a sixth. A place where people never war, never starve, never live suppressed by a greed-driven government. Never, never, never...

A place where the people are free. 

A place called Neverland.

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JWCMaher JWCMaher Aug 08, 2017
This is a great start. You guys have a nice way with details and descriptions that give us just a hint of what's going on, and let us sort of 'fill-in-the-blanks' with the rest of it. Delightful for the reader, because it lets us help paint the picture. 
                              Looking forward to where this goes next!
Ooooohhhhh!!! This is such an amazing start!!!!!! *excited* ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I'm not entirely sure whether this is the right combination... Tiny, miserable corner or pocket, yes, but bubble? 🤔
JWCMaher JWCMaher Aug 08, 2017
This is a very nice touch, just a little detail about Mom's ventilator, to let us know that not all is well in this house. It just buries itself inside this lovely layer, and means so much more than just 'my mom was sick, and had a ventilator...'
A very well written start! Nicely paced and engaging. Really looking forward to reading more.
I might use another word rather than simply tell us its perfect. Perhaps just skip over to why?