What happen's when the power of the elements can be controlled?
I thought it was really interesting:) u had a few errors with the "i's" and a couple in the third paragraph but other than that I can't wait till u post more:)
@DavidCairns sure thing! :) just a moment and I'll pm you my email address so you can send it :)
@RobotsWillCry i would be happy if you would be so kind as to edit it for me :D
yeah, you need to work on punctuation. It reads really scrambled. Also you tend to be repetitive. Just a bit more editing. Also use shorter sentences. Anyway, you have an orphan. What is the problem he is facing?