The Enemy's Brother (On Hold)

The Enemy's Brother (On Hold)

18 Part Story 16K Reads 390 Votes
Abbie By abbielou12 Updated Jan 20, 2013 05:07PM

Blake caught Kitty's attention the very first time they crashed into each other, literally. Unfortunately for Kitty, Blake also happened to be the older brother of her worst enemy. Louisa, head cheerleader and queen bee at school controls everything, except Kitty, the girl who is falling very quickly in love with Blake.
    When a devastating accident happens it looks like it's too late for Kitty and Blake's relationship to be saved, that is until Louisa gets herself in a difficult situation.
    Will Blake have to choose between the two most important girls in his life when Louisa finds herself in trouble, or will the girls manage to make up in time to solve their impossible feud before it's too late?

moiramadamba moiramadamba Jul 05, 2012 09:50AM
The opening is great, but I saw a few mistakes here and there. Though I think it's a little sad - for Kitty that is. Haha. Voted. :)
PokeHaunter PokeHaunter Jul 02, 2012 04:08PM
The opening is really powerful. I love it :) I've added it to my reading list and voted. :D
abbielou12 abbielou12 Jul 02, 2012 03:20PM
@Dreamcometrue123 @AlluringxDreams @Mahshid Thank you all! :D
RahniaForever RahniaForever Jun 03, 2012 11:19AM
This is really interesting..im gonna read the chapters now:) Voted
abbielou12 abbielou12 May 27, 2012 08:42PM
@GABRIELLEJOHN Where you get lost? This is a teaser chapter, so it outlines the main part of the storyline without giving too much away :) x
abbielou12 abbielou12 May 11, 2012 09:21PM
@Sk8er360, @Lovely143 Thank you so much! I hope you read on and find the rest of the story equally as good :) x