The Boss's Niece (A Criminal Minds Fanfiction)

The Boss's Niece (A Criminal Minds Fanfiction)

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Krissie_Mckenna_67 By Krissie_Mckenna_67 Completed

When a certain redhead catches Derek Morgan's eye, he'll do anything to get to know her. When he finds something out about her past, will he still want to stay?  A Criminal Minds Fanfic! Derek Morgan/ Other female character.  ** I do not own Criminal Minds or any of the characters. Kate Brooks is someone I made up. **

I'm sorry but when the author says he was smiling like a idiot,  I could just imagine him talking in his head saying (heavy southern accent) gosh she sure is perty...
LeaveTheTophats LeaveTheTophats Jul 03, 2016
YESSSSSSS!
                              Do you happen to know where I can find Sam and Dean?
AdoptedWinchester AdoptedWinchester May 07, 2015
I hadn't thought about or mentioned the Impala or Supernatural in about an hour. Thought about both...
miss_lavancha miss_lavancha Feb 17, 2015
It is good. Just try to create new paragraphs instead of one long paragraph.
miss_lavancha miss_lavancha Feb 17, 2015
Should be "As she benched, she had no idea that a certain BAU agent was watching her."
clockwork_unicorn13 clockwork_unicorn13 Aug 23, 2014
I definitely like it! Just some friendly advice; maybe start a new paragraph each time the dialog switches from one person to another or if you have over six sentences. Keep up the good work!