Mirror mirror

Mirror mirror

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lollipop2you By lollipop2you Updated Feb 10, 2011

Jane discovers an old mirror in a deserted room, who says mirrors are harmless?..........

amantdefleur amantdefleur Apr 09, 2013
haha I wrote this when I was 13 so it isn't the best of my work, but I am still proud of it haha see my new stuff please!
lollipop2you lollipop2you Feb 06, 2011
please comment on mine I would really like to know how to make my story heaps better.
                              
Zsofia_Az_Almodo Zsofia_Az_Almodo Feb 06, 2011
That is so cooooooooool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love your description, and the way you repeated the first paragraph at the end!
dustclears dustclears Feb 05, 2011
hmmm very interesting, this was way too short so I didn'get a chance to get a feel about the story but it sounds interesting so I will read on!