The Mistakes That Made Us (Being Edited)

The Mistakes That Made Us (Being Edited)

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Nutella Queen!!!!! Bow down Bitches!!!!! By NutellahQueen Updated 2 days ago

Katherine Kyles is a wolf. But not a happy one. Beaten, abused, made fun of, neglected and a horrible family. Not one friend in her own pack. The Neon pack. She's just waiting for her mate. But she's had it with her life. The only reason why she is still alive is because she wants her mate to save her. But that mate is Zayne Austins. Future Alpha. He rejects her in public, so she runs away. But not before she has her first shift. And she's not just any other wolf. She's The Wolf Of Death. So she leaves and becomes Alpha of The Blood Thirst pack. The most ruthless pack ever. Even the name says it!  But her old pack doesn't know who she is. So what happens when she meets her old pack and mate three years later? 


This story used to have a long ass name that I made up as a kid. (My mate rejected me. The most powerful creature in the world) It's currently being edited so please don't read. Its a disaster.

wolves_luver101 wolves_luver101 Dec 24, 2016
Well that was so wrong betraying your own sister for her mate
musicals_books musicals_books Nov 13, 2015
Nutellah queen, What happened to My Mate Rejected Me, the Most Powerful wolf in the world? Why did you delete it? Please email me a musicals_books@yahoo.com thnx
boomboom21455 boomboom21455 Aug 03, 2015
great book will u  update it pls its the only book I wanna read and I enjoy it very much
TheDevilsDemons TheDevilsDemons Jul 12, 2015
I appreciate your honesty but this book sounds cliche but hey, who dosn't love a good cliche werewolf story? am i right?
angelyaj angelyaj Jun 15, 2015
This is actually a good book but in my opinion/preference I enjoy books that are not so bluntly written
vjiminie vjiminie Jun 03, 2015
I have to say, the editing thing did really well for your book! I remember the first time I read it and I remember it needed major editing, this is really good!