My childhood friend is my Mate (under reconstruction)

My childhood friend is my Mate (under reconstruction)

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werewolf4ever191 By werewolf4ever191 Updated Jul 29, 2011

Claire Roland is ruinited with her childhood best friend Nick who was thought to be dead with her parent and the rest of her clan but her Three overprotective brother Nate Jonah and kevin aren't to happy about Nicks arrival. Nick knows that him and Claire are destinded to be mates but will Claire's brothers stand in the way of their relasionship?

BookLuvR15 BookLuvR15 Oct 31, 2012
I know that writing can be tough, and that editing can be really difficult; but don't let that bring you down, the story seems really interesting and I would like to read more of it. So please keep writing
katelynjenkins katelynjenkins May 02, 2011
i was rather disappointed with this. Your quotation marks are in the wrong places, like when you wrote
                              Ex: um...so nick how long are you staying "she said"
                              Or something like that. 
                              I was hoping for something so much better you should look for an editor. 
lizzielizzie lizzielizzie Apr 04, 2011
ugh upload now or sponge bob will bite you!!!!!!! not but please upload now!!!!!!<3
swim-dora swim-dora Feb 19, 2011
I think your ideas are really good and the story had an amazing start.  You should make the chapters longer and pay attention to spelling and grammar though! For example you should put the " marks around what's being said.  Keep writing the story!