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A Deadly Fate

A Deadly Fate

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Lindy! By TaintedDaisies Updated Apr 05, 2012

What if you had the ability to foresee the future ahead of you in your dreams? Every sense, every touch, every smell, every taste... felt as if it was so real. What if they weren't dreams, but nightmares? But in every nightmare there are horrific events that are going to happen, and you are the only one who can stop those horrific events.

Molly Montgomery is a freshman at University who is just looking to finish college as quickly as she can. She doesn't expect having crazy nightmares that foretell the future, and they are not very pleasant. She continuously has dreams about people that she cares about and loved ones that are getting hurt, and even possibly killed. Being the only one capable of even beginning to prevent these literal nightmares from happening, it's up to Molly to stop the man in the dreams from hurting her friends, and finding out why he was doing in the first place.
After truth and lies, Molly discovers more than she ever bargained for. A Deadly fate.

TaintedDaisies TaintedDaisies Dec 19, 2011
@the_secret_writer lol yeah me too, and thanks!
                              @Taylor144 thanks!
Kirbyx Kirbyx Mar 06, 2011
*sigh* Amazing. Only a few select authors had the ability to suck me in and then stop dramatically. As I've told you, the cliff hanger really got to me =P. This has potential!
bella-is-stella bella-is-stella Feb 09, 2011
Wow it is good I like the dream you should really think about writing mystery or something like that you are good at that. Hope you keep writing!
Nuttybio Nuttybio Feb 08, 2011
This is really good :D write more.
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CrazyFrog246 CrazyFrog246 Feb 07, 2011
This is a pretty impressive story. Well done! great ideas, good plotline and characters :-)
x0XjamieeX0x x0XjamieeX0x Feb 07, 2011
Great job! The ending was perfect- with the suspense and all. I like how you introduced Molly and Elsa, and you made her sound pretty normal until she wakes up in the forest. It catches attention and isn't too long- which you want with a first chapter. I'll help you out for sure !