Killer Secrets

Killer Secrets

2.3K Reads 51 Votes 9 Part Story
Rue Styles(: By cookiemuncher Updated Feb 23, 2011

Can love conquer all, even vampires? ~{This story has been discontinued I'm sorry!}

Twilightsinsanefan10 Twilightsinsanefan10 Oct 21, 2012
Full action! Lovin it! You got talent, I imagined every bit of it! Good job. 
                              
                              
                              
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JusLuvLyf JusLuvLyf Mar 03, 2011
it's koo. when i was reading it, it reminds me of a dark comic book because of the way it's written. Yea the main character seems so dark and cold but then again she has been actin like a human and had to deal with females teasing her. I can see how can make her so mad. 
purplegirl14 purplegirl14 Feb 25, 2011
This is a good start, but there a some things that you need to work on. Lots of full stops are needed, and most of your sentences are run-ons. Other than that, just read over your work to check for grammer and spelling. But this is a good start! Keep writing!
CosmosInChaos CosmosInChaos Feb 19, 2011
a bit rushed but I still got your point. You have talent keep it up!!!
leannerosecooper leannerosecooper Feb 13, 2011
Good cliffhanger and you need to add full stops at the end of your sentences and maybe make the spaces inbetween each line smaller but it was good (:
cookiemuncher cookiemuncher Feb 13, 2011
@tianajade thanks for the advice ill try my best to improve from now on :)