Descent Into Darkness

50 Part Story 817K Reads 20.6K Votes
Daniel Stevens By GhostNinja Updated 25 days ago
Phoenix has left his family, and is on a mission to rid the land of Demetrius' influence all by himself. The stone has taken him over almost completely, removing his conscience, and making him capable of horrible acts of violence, murder, and other atrocities. Can Ember, Lindani and Spedro save him before it's too late? Or will he cut a path across the land, leaving a trail of smoke and bodies in his wake?
Good chapter! You are doing a great job with switching the hero to the bad guy and completely changing his persona, that is a difficult skill that you have mastered! I agree with some comments on here, I wish the plot would move forward. I know that writing takes inspiration and that can take time, but I am losing interest because of how much time is being taken between chapters. Can't wait until the next chapter, good luck!
Good chapter! You are doing a great job with switching the hero to the bad guy and completely changing his persona, that is a difficult skill that you have mastered! I agree with some comments on here, I wish the plot would move forward. I know that writing takes inspiration and that can take time, but I am losing interest because of how much time is being taken between chapters. Can't wait until the next chapter, good luck!
Good chapter! You are doing a great job with switching the hero to the bad guy and completely changing his persona, that is a difficult skill that you have mastered! I agree with some comments on here, I wish the plot would move forward. I know that writing takes inspiration and that can take time, but I am losing interest because of how much time is being taken between chapters. Can't wait until the next chapter, good luck!
Good chapter! You are doing a great job with switching the hero to the bad guy and completely changing his persona, that is a difficult skill that you have mastered! I agree with some comments on here, I wish the plot would move forward. I know that writing takes inspiration and that can take time, but I am losing interest because of how much time is being taken between chapters. Can't wait until the next chapter, good luck!
Good chapter! You are doing a great job with switching the hero to the bad guy and completely changing his persona, that is a difficult skill that you have mastered! I agree with some comments on here, I wish the plot would move forward. I know that writing takes inspiration and that can take time, but I am losing interest because of how much time is being taken between chapters. Can't wait until the next chapter, good luck!
Good chapter! You are doing a great job with switching the hero to the bad guy and completely changing his persona, that is a difficult skill that you have mastered! I agree with some comments on here, I wish the plot would move forward. I know that writing takes inspiration and that can take time, but I am losing interest because of how much time is being taken between chapters. Can't wait until the next chapter, good luck!