The Sixteen Queens

The Sixteen Queens

8K Reads 283 Votes 12 Part Story
Sophie By Zsofia_Az_Almodo Updated Jun 13, 2011

The sixteen queens of the House of Esther lived happily, keeping peace in the world. But just before coming of age, the youngest queen, Dulcie is snatched away into another world by a mysterious force. With the help of a boy, Oren, her sister Cora, Queen of the Skies sets off on a mission to discover the ancient portal into another world, but will she be able to return her sister safely back home, and who is so determined for Dulcie not to return home again?

Zsofia_Az_Almodo Zsofia_Az_Almodo Sep 29, 2011
@AllieInWonderland Thanks! I know what you mean about school, I get so busy. Anyway, thanks so much for reading :D
perpetuallystrange perpetuallystrange Sep 29, 2011
Omg i Love the plot!
                              Im adding to my library to read more later! I would read it now but its getting late and i have school!
Lovable_El Lovable_El Jun 28, 2011
I've read and commented on this already:) And unfortunately this is not my type of story, really sorry, but best of wishes for your stories succes:D
Joseph96 Joseph96 Jun 28, 2011
Hi :)
                              I like it, but I think the opening paragraphs could have been  structured better. It seemed a bit rushed to me, but you give us a good idea of what's happening. The plot has got potential; I'll read on!
                              Keep writing :)
CharminglyFearless CharminglyFearless Jun 26, 2011
GOOD. Though, I recommend long chapters cause people like that..It's okay if you don't, it's just a suggestion. voted. on to the next one. Writing is good! And it has a cliffhanger! CHAPTER 2 HERE I COME!
ehesse ehesse Jun 26, 2011
Whoa, this is so cool! I love stories like these, that come completely from the imagination. I'm definitely going to keep reading!
                              
                              You're writing is really good too!(: