Book Two: My Child ~War Of The Immortals series~

Book Two: My Child ~War Of The Immortals series~

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NalaShadowhunter By NalaShadowhunter Completed

Blaze is now a vampire mated to a werewolf, weird isn’t? well it gets more weird… so come join us on their second adventure on My Child, plus there is a big bad/good news, that will make Jacoby and Blaze’s life worst.. or better?.

SamInTheTopHat SamInTheTopHat Nov 08, 2011
Dialogue needs help.
                              
                              "Hey," she said. Notice the comma. Your dialogue is terribly wrong.
                              She sighed, turned and said, "Hey."
                              Just go over all of it, add the commas.
JessaDreams JessaDreams Feb 08, 2011
Omg it would be so cool if they were to have twins =P
                              
                              Nice chapter! I liked it ^-^