Shaken

Shaken

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Jennyfromtheblokkk By foxjenz Updated 6 days ago

© J Butterworth 

When a young expectant mother's life is suddenly shaken upside down how will she survive? 
When a virus spreads throughout the earth and threatens the earths population, Scarlet flees to the Scottish Highlands with her Mother, Caught up In a fight for her life Scarlet faces dangers no mother should when her world changes forever.

How will humanity react and build a future, if that's even possible? 

who is responsible?


Authors note: I will go back at some point and edit....
I will update once a week or more depending on how much I get done.

Hope you enjoy reading, feel free to comment or vote 😃

Cover made by Gisisodia

© J Butterworth

  • action-adventure
  • aliens
  • chicklit
  • dystopian
  • emotionalrollercoaster
  • family
  • featured
  • love
  • mars
  • mother
  • pregnancy
  • romance
  • scifi
  • scotland
  • survival
  • teen
  • virus
  • wattys2017
  • writteninaction
  • youngadult
I agree with everyone that your first chapter dives right in and sets up a good tense scenario. I might break the chapter earlier when her mom tells her to get out. Then you could start chapter 2  with Scarlett's refusal. Cutting like that would end with more drama. Just a thought.
Why did the nurse change her mind? What's her attitude toward changing it?
foxjenz foxjenz Jul 20
@LRandomStuff I know 😳🤔 poor mum 😂 thanks for reading and commenting 👍😁
I want to be married at nineteen and have a baby a little while after
I really love the dynamic between the mother and daughter. I love how you portray something annoying about society, but the daughter doesn't get all hung up over it. The virus is scary/intriguing, and I'm interested to see where you will do with this next.
I love the sentence 'I almost went into labour'. It adds a nice touch of humour. great job!