Stole My Heart (Editing)

Rebecca Thomas is new in town.She is cute,sweet and shy and hates being the centre of attention. Everything seems fine before she starts her new school. She has never had a boyfriend and has never been kissed. She believes in fairy tale romances and hopes that she will find her prince charming soon. Noah James is a popular jock and has a reputation of a player is West High School. When Rebecca and Noah cross paths her life takes an unusual turn. She makes a mistake by falling in love only to have her heart broken. She does everything to make him happy even if it hurts her .Can Noah ever realise what he means to her? Or she will always be just a friend to him? Will Noah and Rebecca ever be together?

heartbreak
highschool
love
lovestory
romance
teenfiction

I m really glad i got to read a stry from indian writter..n stry was...just loved it

I really like the start because it opens it up to a whole range of impossibles, added to library. voted.

This is very well written...your story is unfolding nicely and you have an excellent way of writing the dialogue and descriptions of which are present throughout the story. Voted.

I really like this. The only point would be to check the punctuation and things but other than that it's a really good start. 
                              
                              Kudos on the skills xx

even though this sounds a little cliche I am a big fan of those... I am just the same as the girl...I am a hopless romantic.. I am definatly going to read this story but for now I am going to put in in my phones' library. <3

I don't actually care if this story is said to be cliche or not, I like these type of stories and so I kept on reading. I had no problem with it and I will continue to read. Well written. :)Xoxo