Horror Island

Horror Island

6.8K Reads 120 Votes 10 Part Story
Scott By mylifeisaverage Completed

Three astronauts land near a strange island in the South Pacific. Something is seriously wrong...

Stargirl Stargirl Sep 04
AH, man... SCIENCE. LOVE it! Of course, I've only just started so now I must continue to see where this goes!
Marigord Marigord Oct 08, 2014
This is actually really good. I'm new to writing so I always try and read different types of books so I can improve my writing. Believe me, I have a lot of fantasy, but the thing I have a problem with, is putting my thoughts in words. If you have tips, I would really appreciate them :)
mylifeisaverage mylifeisaverage Feb 25, 2011
@CarlThomas Oh, well thanks then! Glad you liked it then and now!
CarlThomas CarlThomas Feb 25, 2011
Anyway, I'll vote now as I can still picture that cockpit and the accent. Good luck. 
                              
CarlThomas CarlThomas Feb 16, 2011
Reads well, though the beginning threw me as I thought she was in a chair, then a car, then a plane, only to find that she was in a space craft. Might be be but maybe you need to establish the fact in the first few lines. 
TheOrangutan TheOrangutan Feb 07, 2011
Good start, will be intersting to see where you take this one. Gav