Three astronauts land near a strange island in the South Pacific. Something is seriously wrong...
AH, man... SCIENCE. LOVE it! Of course, I've only just started so now I must continue to see where this goes!
This is actually really good. I'm new to writing so I always try and read different types of books so I can improve my writing. Believe me, I have a lot of fantasy, but the thing I have a problem with, is putting my thoughts in words. If you have tips, I would really appreciate them :)
@CarlThomas Oh, well thanks then! Glad you liked it then and now!
Anyway, I'll vote now as I can still picture that cockpit and the accent. Good luck.
Reads well, though the beginning threw me as I thought she was in a chair, then a car, then a plane, only to find that she was in a space craft. Might be be but maybe you need to establish the fact in the first few lines.
Good start, will be intersting to see where you take this one. Gav