Haylee and the Last Traveler

Haylee and the Last Traveler

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Lisa Redfern By LisaRedfern Completed

Returning to the 1980's after a time jump, Haylee tries re-adjusting to a life that is 'back-to-normal.'  But things aren't how she left them; she's about to become a new mother and she's missing the baby's father who stayed in 1850.

Haylee is fretting about, Josh, the man she almost fell in love with, here. After an unthinking attack where she left him decaying in a hospital bed she thinks she might be able to help him-- if she can get close enough.

This book follows Haylee and the Traveler's Stone [Available on Amazon http://amzn.to/2sqkSaQ], but it can stand alone. The Wattpad version is the beta read iteration.

Bonnie95949 Bonnie95949 Jul 08
I am really imaging chaos and pain! A terrified panic taking over.  The word "patterns" brings to my mind something like organized, or orderly, or predictable .
Bonnie95949 Bonnie95949 Jul 08
Starting 'your parents came to collect you' I got confused because I forgot who Gene was talking to.   I think it had been awhile since I was oriented to the fact that he was talking to Jason.  But then Jason's name appeared in the next paragraph so it's probably OK.
Bonnie95949 Bonnie95949 Jul 08
The "occurrence" - did Reece know it was going to happen? I got stuck on the word and had to think about it for awhile and try to understand why it seemed like an understatement about  a huge disaster.  Several chapters later I realized maybe he knew the fire was going to happen.