My knight in shining shorts

My knight in shining shorts

13 Part Story 1.1K Reads 50 Votes
Vicki By vickiangel8 Updated Aug 06, 2012

When you meet the one. Your life changes forever. I met the one. He was supposed to save me... Instead he hurt me the most. Does true love really conquer all?

dxntstopluke dxntstopluke Jul 05, 2012 02:16PM
I liked how you started the chapter with a really good hook! Making me wonder what will stick in my head forever?!?!?!?! Anyway, very descriptive and well written! :D Good job! lol, keep it going (: xx
vickiangel8 vickiangel8 Jul 05, 2012 12:40PM
@0_olocachica0-o  Thank youuuuuu!!!! :D sorry bout yesterday, crappy internet cut off :s
I am intrigued. Looks like this could be good. Added to my library!
AlexisSims AlexisSims Jun 15, 2012 10:22PM
Your characters are very relatable and appealing, you main character in particular. You dialogue is very authentic and well crafted. I know that teens will love your story. Nice read!
orangeriot12 orangeriot12 Jun 15, 2012 10:06PM
I really loved the beginning; it got my attention right away and made me want to read more, so well done there. The plot seems very interesting so far. Can't wait to read on =)
ESummerlee ESummerlee Apr 22, 2012 12:33PM
Minus the caps and the "soooo" this was a brilliant start, love the original idea, keep it up!
                              
                              Sorry for not getting to this earlier >.<!