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When Summer Came (ON HOLD)

When Summer Came (ON HOLD)

790 Reads 35 Votes 6 Part Story
Sophie By Zsofia_Az_Almodo Updated Apr 24, 2011

Lucy Beam is about to finish year 8, and then the summer holidays will begin. Her older sister will be home from university, her little sister will be acting like a maniac, and she will have heaps of time to spend with her three best friends in the whole world, Mia, Amy and Jasmin. The only problem is, that someone is doing everything in their power to break their friendship and steal away Jasmin. Is it too late to save Jasmin from the 'dark side' or will it be too late?

writerz101 writerz101 Feb 06, 2011
AWESOME story! I love it! I voted, fanned and added it to my library!!! Keep writing!!!!!
Zsofia_Az_Almodo Zsofia_Az_Almodo Feb 04, 2011
@chairsniffa thanks!!! i love reading sci fi and all that but i just cant write it!
chairsniffa chairsniffa Feb 04, 2011
Well I am happy I don't write teen fiction cause against competition like you I'd be hard pressed to be successful! Paranormal sci fi and humour for me! Lol
Zsofia_Az_Almodo Zsofia_Az_Almodo Feb 04, 2011
@chairsniffa thanks so much! i try to make my writing interesting, but a bit imaginative at the same time
Zsofia_Az_Almodo Zsofia_Az_Almodo Feb 04, 2011
sorry its so big! i started this story last year, and i've got like a quarter of it written, but the chapters are a bit long, i think.
dustclears dustclears Feb 04, 2011
I luv it!! You are so amazing I am totally recomending you to all my friends!! Beautiful description, characters, grammar and plot!