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11 + 1 (Ongoing)

11 + 1 (Ongoing)

90.8K Reads 3.4K Votes 34 Part Story
YukiDono By CarmeLaeve Updated May 19

A 'Reverse Harem' story. Nicollete was living an ordinary life until she was shocked by her father's debt and she was sent to live with 11 boys that she have never met. Her life is about to change with new adventures awaits for her.

saltyafbye saltyafbye Feb 10
Oh hi fourth wall! Sorry bout that, ur leg must hurt. Nicole did some serious breaking.
cybrsherri cybrsherri Dec 12, 2016
Everyone must start somewhere and you are brave enough to go for it, so no judgements, just thank you for sharing!
PrincessOfMayhem PrincessOfMayhem Jun 29, 2015
If you would like, I'm good at editing/revising, so maybe I could help with your story on those terms. :)
Turtles4TW Turtles4TW Mar 02, 2014
I love the tone of this chapter. It's exactly like something my friend would say but the last sentence has some grammar mistakes. Besides that it's great. :D
HelloKeyy HelloKeyy Feb 14, 2014
story is really good so far . minor grammar errors but nothing too serious. i like the cliffhanger at the end :)
adreaminacup adreaminacup Jan 25, 2014
I can tell the main character really wants to make her parents proud and is devastated that her family is indebt all of a sudden. Dramatic story! :)