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Run Little One

Run Little One

841 Reads 9 Votes 2 Part Story
Whatsername By TheGreenGurl Updated Feb 15, 2011

Will you run,
Run with me?
Run with the wolves,
To come and see?
What death brings with the duels.

If you've fell,
Come with me.
For I am the one,
They call Drel.

If your the he,
Come with me.
We shall be,
Forever and

If you're the she,
Come with me.
We shall be,
Forever and

S0LACE S0LACE May 05, 2013
Oh this is beautiful :D Your style is incredible, will you not finish this? How I would love to know what happens next... :D
TheGreenGurl TheGreenGurl Jul 11, 2011
@SaraNicholeBurton Haha. Thanks. And I have the next chapter written, I just don't know if I want it to flow like that or not, also I haven't typed it up yet. :)
anna_marie0408 anna_marie0408 Jun 24, 2011
Your really good at detail which in contrast is what publishers look for, and trust me they look hard for that (my mother has a book published and mine should be happening soon)   Your dialogue is fairly nice to. Keep at it!
TheGreenGurl TheGreenGurl Jun 23, 2011
@wainikkaclarke: Oh thank you so much for your comment! :)
                              @SweetDimples: Thanks for your feed back. You guys really have no idea how much I appreciate this stuff, honestly. 
wainikkaclarke wainikkaclarke Jun 22, 2011
I'm not usually a werewolf fan but your writing is good and I enjoyed it. :)
                              Keep it up!
TheGreenGurl TheGreenGurl May 19, 2011
                              I'm going to try! Writers' block kills, dudett. Haha. Well I will try and I believe I may pick up the story again once school is out for summer break. Again, I thank you so much for your support!