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Fire Child (Watty Awards!!)

Fire Child (Watty Awards!!)

3.1K Reads 56 Votes 14 Part Story
emmikat By emmikat Completed

Kat has a problem. A secret. She must find her boyfriend Matt. Katherine Chance needs a chance to find the meaning of  her life, and this might just be the way to find it...

GenXblogger GenXblogger Mar 28, 2011
Very creative!
                              There are some editing things here and there, mostly they look like typos not things "wrong" per say. 
                              Voted, and reading on!
                              (if you need help with editing let me know, I'd be happy to get more specific but it's hard without the word.doc file) 
porshalovebby porshalovebby Mar 25, 2011
I agree with the comment below very oringal I like the idea its really good!
yongyoons yongyoons Mar 24, 2011
This story is so creative. 
                              I've never read a story about a fire child before. :)
                              I love it.
Peckinpah Peckinpah Mar 23, 2011
Firebender! lol just kidding.
                              Amazing story and the way you deliver it is like I'm there sitting on on a chair while Kat, is it? is just narrating away ^^
                              keep it up!
PollardWharly PollardWharly Mar 22, 2011
The story is mostly good. The dialogue had some weakness that I wouldnt mind seeing repaired a tad. It really is otherwise very good. 
NikkyStorm NikkyStorm Mar 21, 2011
same thing that they say ... lol i love fire 2 im weird vote and added to my library lol