Kat has a problem. A secret. She must find her boyfriend Matt. Katherine Chance needs a chance to find the meaning of her life, and this might just be the way to find it...
There are some editing things here and there, mostly they look like typos not things "wrong" per say.
Voted, and reading on!
(if you need help with editing let me know, I'd be happy to get more specific but it's hard without the word.doc file)
I agree with the comment below very oringal I like the idea its really good!
This story is so creative.
I've never read a story about a fire child before. :)
I love it.
Firebender! lol just kidding.
Amazing story and the way you deliver it is like I'm there sitting on on a chair while Kat, is it? is just narrating away ^^
keep it up!
The story is mostly good. The dialogue had some weakness that I wouldnt mind seeing repaired a tad. It really is otherwise very good.
same thing that they say ... lol i love fire 2 im weird vote and added to my library lol