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Me, Him, and My Brother

Me, Him, and My Brother

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orangecow2 By orangecow2 Updated Feb 15, 2012


Jodiii Jodiii Feb 27, 2011
hi, this is realyy good i was wondering if you could read my book please and give me some advise please....
                              its kinda based on  my life a bitt so yeah please help me with it because it myfirst ever book <3
                              jodi x
orangecow2 orangecow2 Feb 06, 2011
@evilangel15 can you tell me how its confusing so i dont do that in the future or any tip
evilangel15 evilangel15 Feb 06, 2011
This is awesome!! keep updating, it is a little confusing at parts, but good all the same
michilowey michilowey Feb 05, 2011
It's really good, but you went to quickly to the plott but it is really good i LoVE it actually. Oh, You know, you should write who said what when there are more than 2 people talking 
                              Continue with it ! :D
Noodlesnog82 Noodlesnog82 Feb 05, 2011
mmmm to b honest, its a bit well....quick. you seem to jump into everything really quickly. also, you have many spelling/grammer mistakes and at the end of each speech, you have to put in one of these:
                              , . ! ? ; 
                              type of thing. need some work but all in all not bad