Secret Forbidden Connections (slowly editing & plot changing)

6 Part Story 1K Reads 104 Votes
Maryam By mimi17143 Updated 3 years ago
Valina is your average, everyday, eighteen year old vampire. 
    Besides the fact that she's now the queen of the most powerful vampire coven, of course.
    As queen, Valina must keep the peace between vampires and werewolves in her community; which seems easy enough.
    Until suddenly, creatures from both races start disappearing. Both races blame one another for the disappearances of their kind. Valina, however, has a feeling that a greater power is at work that is causing, both vampires and werewolves, to disappear. 
    Valina, along with her best friend and assistant, Leala must team up with Daren, the new werewolf king and his assistant, Philander, to stop the evil force at work to bring back their people.
    Is it possible for vampires and werewolves to work together? Could Valina possibly stop this mysterious evil force? 
    She's definitely wiling to try, no matter what it takes.
This intro pulls me into the story. It leaves me wondering, which is good! Voted (:
Very well written. Nice dilogue. I love the whole concept, it seems to flow nicely *Thumps up
I'm not much of a fan for Vamp stories but your was actually interesting, a nice spin on off the norm, well done!
A little confusion. What does the name Valina mean? It sounds beautiful actually :)
                                    Alright getting back to the topic. It is really really good plot. I am understanding the stuff now after the little intro.
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Intro isn't really explainable. So, I'll read more to comment about it. Till now it is good :)
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Ok so I couldn't wait for the tomorrow, so I decided to read the 1st chapter. All I can say is that I cant wait to read more. I am interested to see how the ceremony goes and to learn more about Valina. Keep up the great writing, I can't wait to read more.