Too Good To Stay Away (Teacher/Student Relationship)

Too Good To Stay Away (Teacher/Student Relationship)

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Whitney T. Hines By Whines8 Updated Jul 09, 2013

Demi McDaniel is an 18 year old girl in her last year of high school. She doesn't have any friends anymore and keeps to herself, purposely not letting anyone in or close to her. She has her reasons for being the way she is and she plans on staying that way, focusing all her time on graduating and her music until high school is over and then she'll finally be able to leave the place that holds the memories that she wishes to forget, along with leaving behind her horrid home life. But when a new and young music teacher is hired in as a substitute he instantly takes an interest in Demi, slowly getting her to let her barriers down and possibly taking her heart as well.

prettyezria prettyezria Jan 11, 2015
oh shît I started my own attempt at a story like this (before I read this) but mine starts almost the same way with the main character being a loner as well who turns down guys & friend requests.. guess I'm gonna think about another storyline xD
Lover_016 Lover_016 Aug 31, 2014
Does anyone know a movie of a teacher student relationship???
GraceIsHere GraceIsHere May 29, 2013
The introduction really captured my attention. Think I am going to like it.
lydiad55 lydiad55 May 30, 2012
I love the introduction you give to each of your characters - it's nicely done and doesn't seem like the information is being forced on me. :) Promising story!
rperna176 rperna176 Apr 25, 2012
I really like the idea of this story! If anything there's a few punctuation errors, but they can be easily fixed!
BlurryWords BlurryWords Apr 25, 2012
Both her mother and step dad sound horrible. Her mother is really awful for letting her husband try to do that to her daughter. 
                              I think this is a good start. You've clearly introduced the main character and made her background easy to understand. This is a really nice start.