Desired {Watty Awards 2012}

Desired {Watty Awards 2012}

11 Part Story 35.5K Reads 342 Votes
Jenna By BrokenWingAngel Completed

The storm brought them here. The people were different. The water stretched on for miles. The Island they never heard of, it was something they never expected. To be here, to be told they would never go home. Alexis was young yet, only the age of nineteen and still finding herself. Drew was mysterious and quiet, only a bit older twenty two to be exact. They had only traveled out on the boat to get away from everything, it was only supposed to be a day trip. A day that would last a lifetime.

khelrin khelrin Jan 07, 2013 03:24AM
Good works :) it makes me remember the Leonardo Di Caprio's film Shutter Island. :D  nice one  =)
tcdelaney tcdelaney May 27, 2012 01:11AM
Enjoyed story very much. It could have a true story about a group of teenagers and their adventures. The ending was so creative I don' t think anyone could have predicted anything like that. Keep writing.
@Eclipse119 well actually to be honest. My editor fixed those your to you're for me, I suck at that. lol Thanks for the awesome comment though :)
Eclipse119 Eclipse119 May 18, 2012 02:50PM
Amazing detail. Very professional! It's all real and really nicely written! I want to congratulate you on the correct use of "Your" Vs. "You're" because not many people understand that difference, and it's one of my pet peeves as a writer!!! :D
Wunderist Wunderist May 14, 2012 09:19PM
Love love lovin' it!! Keep up the good work, I'll be back for more!! :p :)
ysabek ysabek May 14, 2012 08:37PM
you have a FEW errors. watch out for those. however, your descriptions are incredibly vivid. loved your description of the women's hair especially. i dont know why the word 'cascade' just has this effect on me.. :P anyway great job :) xx