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SpaceRats

SpaceRats

307 Reads 58 Votes 7 Part Story
Paul Fleming By PaulJFleming Updated Jul 10, 2017

A work-in-progress and more an effort to push my writing before an unseen audience in order to overcome my reluctance to allow anyone to set eyes upon my efforts.

The lure of adventure beyond the confines of the space station fills Jason with dreams, but reality proves much less appealing when he's forced to leave his home behind.

  • action
  • fiction
  • sciencefiction
  • scifi
  • shortstory
  • spacecraft
  • spaceopera
  • spacestation
  • wattys2017
reebree reebree Jun 25, 2017
Can we just take a moment and appreciate your writing? Like, holy potatoes dude, these descriptions and dialogues are insanely good.
JWCMaher JWCMaher Jun 27, 2017
Nice relationship established between the brother and sister. They obviously care each other, and when the 'almighty Robert' gets introduced, you can almost see him enter the room. Nice work.
MissSpel MissSpel Jun 22, 2017
loved the first chapter!!! your writing flows really nicely and the ending is ominous but makes you want to read more!
JWCMaher JWCMaher Jun 26, 2017
Your title is so fitting of this first chapter. The way you describe how he feels about the ship, how he feels the walls closing in around him, really gives the sense of a true Space Rat. Great start.