Inland Waterways

Inland Waterways

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Lars Leonhard By larsleonhard Completed

This story is about a person who lives through a personal cataclysmic event, which sparks a big cross-America spanning boat trip with the ghosts of yore haunting him.

Read what happened and what drives this protagonist to start across the shiny inland waterways across America.

Interesting premise and well-handled language, but could do with some trimming down. It goes off on a lot of unnecessary tangents and I wish we saw more active scenes than backstory.