My version of twilight Book 1

My version of twilight Book 1

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Jennifer Benton By Immortal_Forever31 Completed

This is a story about me Jennifer Rose Swan and the Cullen's. I am changing Bella's name to mine and I also have changed the story up alot to the way I want it to be. I hope yall enjoy.

DarlingDaughter DarlingDaughter Nov 10, 2013
I really like the story, but I find when they are talking its awkward. They way they always say the other persons name is odd, because you don't do that in real life, nor in other books. Other then that its good! :)
pari0998 pari0998 Aug 28, 2013
This is a nice story I have to read more but the first chapter was
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luvchristmas luvchristmas Jan 12, 2013
I luv this story so so so so so so much this is my 3rd time reading it!!!!!!:8) glasses rock!!
BrittanyHuey BrittanyHuey Jun 05, 2012
It's good but I believe you shouldnt  but your name in every sentence you put when one of the other characters are tlkin to you Other than that I liked it every much
Immortal_Forever31 Immortal_Forever31 Mar 21, 2012
@michiepurple Thanks, just keep in mind that this is my first story and the grammer is not that good or the spelling. But thanks and I hope you like it.
OBrien_has_Stiles OBrien_has_Stiles Mar 21, 2012
this sounds so interesting i cant wait to finish it. but i already know it is going to be good