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Falling to Pieces

Falling to Pieces

21K Reads 420 Votes 36 Part Story
guardedsoul By guardedsoul Updated Aug 13, 2015

Do you know that feeling, that feeling of your life completely changing in the matter of a second? Jessica Hayes did, and she knew it very well. For her, senior year was supposed to be a year filled with unwanted girly drama but little did she realize that the troubles to come weren't just simple fights between her and her friends. The only good thing that came from all of it was meeting Zach Bryan and his dangerous past. But soon enough, Jess finds herself entangled in this world of drugs, lies, and so much more. It was inevitable, but will Zach be able to pull her out or will she keep falling to pieces?

akrox58 akrox58 Jan 18, 2014
Your narration style is totally awesome! You've got nothing to improve on! Ive just read one chapter and I love it already! Great work <3
k8ybug k8ybug Dec 29, 2011
wow your writing style is so nice that the words just flow! liked the idea too!
guardedsoul guardedsoul Nov 30, 2011
@JasjitKhosah aww, you're so sweet! i'm so glad you like it :) i uploaded just now btw!
yearsarelimeted yearsarelimeted Nov 29, 2011
@always-forever  np i actually love ur story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
overandabovethestars overandabovethestars Aug 23, 2011
Well-written and intriguing. :) Just remember to indent your paragraphs. :)
xImprintedx xImprintedx Jun 21, 2011
I love sunsets. They are never the same color. I like how your story is very descriptive. I get just a little lost on why she is getting in to bed so early.