Anabell's a girl who's never had the love of others. So when her mate rejects her she thinks enough is enough so she runs away where she think she meets love, but does she?
Ooh, Ooh! Me! Pick me! It looks like you DEFINITELY need some help there girl...
Capitalize beginning of quote if it is beginning of sentence
Your my new best friend! I looooove oreos soooo much and no one else in my family does??!! Right Weirdos haha
I can do the editing. I love the writing but it needs to be edited because of mostly grammar and punctuation.
Put period between about and the then start new sentence. Then put a period between me and rejected to start a new sentence. It will run more smoothly
Just read the entire book and the plot is cool. Grammar needs a little work though and some parts don't really make sense like the thing I commented on a few minutes ago.
I've got time on my hands and I'd be willing to edit if you'd like. Wouldn't be perfect but it would be edited xD