I hate you...but you can still love me (ON HOLD)

I hate you...but you can still love me (ON HOLD)

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Chocolateroxz-DTV By Chocolateroxz-DTV Updated Dec 26, 2011

"Hey, Jen whats your zodiac?" Crissy asks. "It says I'm a rat." i say smirking. "I run away from my problems, strange isn't it?" i say smiling
*10 years later 
Jennifer is an average girl, that has to do everything her parents say. They control everything that happens in her life. why? Because it's not always easy being a famous, successful criminal lawyers daughter. Her past exactly helpful either, but when they choose something that she'll have to deal with her whole life, she's struck. They won't  take no for an answer and she's not willing to give in. So what does she do? Runs away. On the trip it's hard  being on the run, when practically the whole nation looking for and you start seeing your name on wanted posters. The only good side to this is that she might have found that special someone but... will fate decide other wise? Join the crazy runaway story with action, drama, humor and touch of romance. Not everything is all perfect flowers for Jen, have you ever felt like your whole life changes in a day? Well thats Jen's story for you.

ahoy_its_zoe ahoy_its_zoe Oct 30, 2011
I agree with ColorfulQuirks but other than those mistakes a really good story.
Chocolateroxz-DTV Chocolateroxz-DTV Aug 10, 2011
@Emo-nerd tnx u so much for voting n commenting it means so much to me ;)
thedarkartschronicle thedarkartschronicle Aug 09, 2011
i lyked it, rlly. i'm not good with grammer so i'm not sure if there were mistakes.
                              but i rlly lyked. reminds me of my parents
Chocolateroxz-DTV Chocolateroxz-DTV Aug 09, 2011
@DoWhatMakesYouHappy Tnxz dude I think i will get another editor:)
XxxAJxxX XxxAJxxX Apr 12, 2011
you welcome :) and thx! I really try but every time I get onto the computer it seems I just have time to check my email and update Facebook or something and then I have to do homework or something! But seriously you are a good writer :) keep it up :)
Chocolateroxz-DTV Chocolateroxz-DTV Apr 11, 2011
@XxxAJxxX awww Tnxz u heart ur writing too a girls best friend and u <3 the fact u upload fast and tnx y so much 4 reading
                              ~ Chocolateroxz-DTV